Narrative Writing - The Second Draft
Hello Team,
We have now finished the editing phase of your narrative writing. The comments should provide information to enhance vocabulary, add enriching detail considering multiple senses, and focus your moral.
You will go though your draft and make the changes that you agree with and truly believe will enhance your story.
Although your editor took a great deal of time to provide critical editing of your story, the final decesion rests on you the writer. You must write what you are confident is your best work and best reflects you as an author. Thus, it is okay to not use your editors suggestions.
As well, you will also take a few moments looking for two additional images that you want to use in your story that will compliment and flow with the original image and your story. The search will take time to find the best image to suit your story.
You will then need to work on layout design in your word document to incorporate the editing in text and the inclusion of two powerful images.
Quizes:
Evaluation Updates:
http://ilearntechnology.com/?p=4592 The site that turns your words into your picture
Pyramid Champs
Nicole & Lisa
Heads Up Top 3
1. Tehreem 91 points
2. Lisa 83 (2nd time on the top 3 list)
2. Anurag 75
Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Rebound - The Final Chapter
Rebound - The Final Chapter
Hello Team,
We are now ready to finish our novel. It has been a significantly long journey, taking the time exploring reading strategies and reviewing the power of narrative in discovering morals, purpose, and symbolism.
As well we have learned about ourselves as we have read through the events of Sean and David. each moment revealing something about our morals and values.
Now David's fate will be revealed. Recall how many predicted and believed that David would walk again, this is now seemingly unlikely.
What do you feel, reflect, or predict will finally happen.
Hello Team,
We are now ready to finish our novel. It has been a significantly long journey, taking the time exploring reading strategies and reviewing the power of narrative in discovering morals, purpose, and symbolism.
As well we have learned about ourselves as we have read through the events of Sean and David. each moment revealing something about our morals and values.
Now David's fate will be revealed. Recall how many predicted and believed that David would walk again, this is now seemingly unlikely.
What do you feel, reflect, or predict will finally happen.
Monday, November 28, 2011
Rebound - The Cliff / Visualization
Rebound Visualization Assignment:
Design
and sketch the scene at the warehouse and cliff as Sean looks for David. The characters are not essential
in the sketch but a vivid and detailed sketch is. Consider the warehouse, fence, path, shrubs, glistening
metal when making your design.
Recall
that visualization is one of the essential reading strategies. In this assignment you are using your
imagination to fill in and expand uponthe basic details provided by the author. This gives the chapter vibrant energy
and makes you a more engaged reader.
Begin
with a rough sketch and plan in your scrapbook, then get your planned checked
by Mr. Cheney. Do your good copy
on cardstock, consider framing your finished product.
Due
date: Monday December 5th
Friday, November 25, 2011
Star Trek
Hello Team,
I realize many want to see a preview of the film we will be showing in the movie room for the next dance. Well, here it is. Enjoy:
I realize many want to see a preview of the film we will be showing in the movie room for the next dance. Well, here it is. Enjoy:
BY POPULAR DEMAND I BRING YOU THE TRAILER FOR STAR TREK II THE WRATH OF KHAN:
Captain Kirk Speech "I need my pain:
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